The author made a claim that high school is only one
important experience among many different stages in life. In other words, high
school won’t determine the rest of our lives. The article started by an
observation of Kurt Vonnegut who believed life is nothing but high school. Then
the author used many research to rebut this counterclaim. One is the study released
by the National Bureau of Economic Research that one’s social status in high
school has a “sizable effort” on their earnings as an adult, which can partly
rebut that observation because the effort is not absolute. Another one is the
Wisconsin program, and they got the conclusion that many of adult outcomes can
be traced back in part of high school experience. The author admits that the
life in high school can make an effort on the rest, but not determinative. Many
factors affect this, such as popularity, friendship, intelligence and hard
work. The author used different studies that “popularity is not all it’s
cracked up to be” and students succeed because of dogged effort rather than innate
brilliance to support this subclaim. On the whole, the author used many research
and studies to support the claim, which is the ethos, adding much credibility
to convincing the audience.
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