Wednesday, November 13, 2013

Flame Off - Extreme Teen Plastic Surgery


    This video shared an extreme story with us, in which a 16-year-old girl, Christine, had her breast augmentation surgery due to her difficulty at school. Everyone made fun of her due to her unsatisfying body. Christine cried when she told the journalist her hard experience at school. Supported by her mother, Christine had her breast augmentation at sixteen. Fortunately, the surgery was a success. Christine felt happy not only with her outside change but her inside confidence.Most of the viewers commented below the video that Christine was too young to have the cosmetic surgery. She would not stop growing her breast until 21 or 22 years old. And she did not have to worry about her weight since 120 pounds is not fat at all. She could consider transferring to a new school to get away of abuses and mocks rather than having cosmetic surgery at underage. There were also viewers supporting her by saying that "we should not be shaming teenagers for wanting plastic surgery, we should be helping them instead." 
   I intervened a few comments below the video to try to bring civility back into the argument and to relate this debate with my semester topic. Firstly, this video well reflected my semester claim that cosmetic surgery could enhance patients’ emotional confidence as well as social status. As showed in this video, Christine suffered mocks at school, making her difficult to endure. However, after the breast augmentation, she felt happy with her change and felt more confident in school. Secondly, this video went against the qualifier of my semester claim that only people over 18 years old could be permitted to have cosmetic surgery. Christine is only 16. She was too young to have such kind of surgery. She had a bright future to become more charming and sexy when she grew older. I used argument of authority as learned in class, citing an old saying in Asia that “a girl changes eighteen times before reaching womanhood”, which means that girls are likely to become beautiful as they grow up. I used policy claim by insisting that Christine should be banned by her parents and doctor to do the surgery at 16. If things will not become better after 18 years old, she can choose to do the surgery at that time. Overall, I engaged some viewers as well as supported some viewers by using policy claims, qualifier and rebuttal of Toulmin model, and argument of authority, in order to engage in this assignment. 
  
My comments:

Reply to Alexandria Faber:

Women usually do cosmetic surgery because they want to enhance their social status as well as their confidence. You know, women with good looks can find a better job easily. Good looks also help their marriage and human relationships. They have their rights to change if they want. However, in this case, I will not support Christine to do cosmetic surgery if I were her mom. She is only 16. She is too young to have such kind of surgery

 

Reply to MissInstinctualism:

Xiaowen Jiang


 
Moreover, the doctor SHOULD decline plastic surgeries for children, unless they are burnt or with serious birth defect. In this program, I appreciate the doctor's hard work and success, but I do not think the doctor's choice should be advocated. Doctors should turn to many other patients who need cosmetic surgery more.  


Respond to cjfelldownagain:

Indeed, teenagers also have their right to be more beautiful. But, they are growing up! I don't think their parents or clinics should be helping them to do surgery at such an early age. As an Asian saying goes, " A girl changes eighteen times before reaching womanhood", which means that girls will always become beautiful naturally when they grow old. So, you do not have to pay for plastic surgery. You will become good as a teen.

Her mother should have a second thought as well. Mother can do more at home to encourage her daughter out of depression, can help her to do more exercise and better diet, can help her to move to a new school, can tell children that you are the best in the world, and can promise kids that they will be permitted to do cosmetic surgery when they become older. Sending kids to hospital so early is definitely not a good idea. 

Moreover, the doctor SHOULD decline plastic surgeries for children, unless they are burnt or with serious birth defect. In this program, I appreciate the doctor's hard work and success, but I do not think the doctor's choice should be advocated. Doctors should turn to many other patients who need cosmetic surgery more.  

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